Second Genesis Prologue

This is the prologue of my yet untitled story. I'm hosting it here on deviantArt just because I get truncated when I put it on other sites (various PHP boards, Myspace blogs, stuff of the sort). I'm not hungry for critique, I just want to get it out there. It's not done, but it's freakin long. I'll update with chapters when I get them written.

UPDATE: The story has a title now. It's called The Nameless Wars: Second Genesis. It has a nice ring to it, I think

Chapter Comments: This was just setting the pretense of the story. There aren't a whole lot of glaring things to talk about, so I'll just let the reader sink into the story for now.

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PDF is much prettier than HTML or TXT, plus this way I can submit each chapter without breaking them up.